久慕洞庭秀,登楼魄不还.

                                     三湘呈画卷,两字映凋澜.

                                     家国兴衰事,官民毁誉谈.

                                     好风凭着力,送我上君山.

                                 朱啸先生原玉

                                     车走临湘道,巴陵一日还.

                                     烟波沉远水,风雨蚀凋阑.

                                     子敬埋憨骨,希文呓梦谈.

                                     寻常优乐事,不必近君山.